Monday, March 30, 2009

Just a dream

saw you in a painting, you looked great
since you left the painting, its just pale
fill the color, i asked you. wont u go back to the picture?
You said, "i am the picture.i am the color.
i am the nature and all its flavor”

I asked,
“pictured you naked, i picture you in brace.
but when i see you, you are in my page
i draw you, i write. i sing for you.
Is this right, when will I cure?”

You said,
“I am the dream, I am the light
I am the memory of your plight”

I asked,
“ but you turn me on. makes me wild.
You make me sing and write
i know it for sure,this so right
I see in your eyes stars so bright”

You said,
“I am a lie inside out, which
makes you bet all that's worth”

I asked,
“those caring hands, soothing touch
the fragrant breath, with eyes so lit
it aint true that you not true
I see god in all that’s you”

You smiled and said,
“Now that you made me god,
Now for the favor I ask, just nod”

I interrupted,
“don’t let me go or stop
I like it here, with you”

You said,
“Its 9 o clock, better get up
You can’t be sleeping all day long”

So just another dream, I woke up
And got on with my day.


:)

4 comments:

Inspiration said...

Hmmm. Poem about dream. I wonder how you get such pleasant dreams!!!!

Neatly Written, but i felt Varun care write much more better, best than this.. Keep writing and pour in your ideas and experiences..

Cheers,
J

Isha said...

This one is beautifully composed.
I like the way u’ve framed these lines (below).
I asked,
“but you turn me on. Makes me wild.
You make me sing and write
i know it for sure, this so right
I see in your eyes stars so bright”

I asked,
“those caring hands, soothing touch
the fragrant breath, with eyes so lit
it aint true that you not true
I see god in all that’s you”

*Truely with all my heart,I loved it !

shree said...

ohhh so now ur a poet .... frankly speakin i like ur poem then ur other writings .. its so smooth n flowing .. beautifully framed sentences ... but i personally feel the ending dint go with it ...i mean the whole wakin up thing ... i wanted 2 read more of it ..n then u just end it abruptly .... tatz defi not wat i was expectin ...

nazneen said...

Give us another "dream"...willya? :P
Nice and very neat!!